Age/Gender: 19, Male
Location: Glendale, Arizona
Job: Auto Tech/musician
Anyone wanna help me with flash? Thx! <TK>
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I love the way this sounds. It's all nice and flowy 'n stuff. The 9 is because i don't think 10's are realistic, but I did vote 5/5.
By the way, I love that synth u used for the "melody".
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Thank you very much
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I'm not going to lie, this was surprisingly good. I honestly can't find one thing I don't like about this song. i mean, this is REALLY good! Everything flows, it's all smooth and peaceful, the drum beat is awesome and I didn't expect it but when it came in I totally got into this. Great work on this!!!
5/5 10/10
Awesome job!!!
>TorkKey<
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Thank you very much :)
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My only real problem with it is that it took 2 minutes to build up. Once it got there is was pretty sick.
Possibly my only other suggestion is add a real bass beat, even if it's simple. That little bass drop is a cool effect, but it's no replacement.
from 3:03 to the end is pretty nice as well. Overall I guess it's pretty good.
4/5 8/10
Keep it up (and work on bass lines)
>TorkKey<
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I love the way the snare sounds when it does it's little fill. Great work on that.
OH SHIT! 1:55 kicks man! The bass on that is AWESOME!!!!!!! Blew my mind!!!!!
Anyway, great job on it. 5/5 9/10
ps-the 9 is cause the ending is kinda, "eh". In fact, it kinda doesn't end.
Great job man!!!!
>TorkKey<
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Yeah the bass was kick-ass, and yea i didnt really finish the beat, when i make a longer version ill hit up that ending jus for u! lol no homo
~Keep It Boss~
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This is really cool. It's dirty and hits hard. I like it. :)
I wish my stuff sounded like this. Lol.
Good work man!
>TorkKey<
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thanks
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Finally you made something? proud of ya.
It's really good. Actually, in a way it's better than my stuff.
But if your not sure about genre, listen to some submissions by other people (usually the highest score in that genre will work)...
Good job and good luck!
>TK<
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Thanks for the review dude.
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One hour to "perfect" nine seconds of a LOOP...
I'm sorry, but this isn't that great... The problem is that it's just too short. Try spending a day on it to make a little bit longer and I'd say that it would be amazing... Until then, I'm sorry it just isn't that good.
Let me know if you make a longer version!
>TK<
Author's Response:
It's not something I can control.
Fruity loops only permits a 64 beat bar.
The only thing I can imagine of doing is looping through by copying the tracks on audacity.
That would solve the *length* portion of the loop.
Thanks for the feedback.
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but I noticed that the music kind of drowns out the voice (not in a good way... I dont even know if there is a good way)...
Other than that, pretty good song!
>TK<
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Yeah, Eddies Voice was always meant to be a background thing during the groove, so that you would notice it more when the beat dropped.
Thanks for rating.
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but not by much. Your going to have to get away from using Sytrus. I mean, it's not that it's bad, its actually good, but it's just been used and abused by EVERYONE!!!
In fact, if you want, I know where you can get some good free ones that you can mess around with (yes they have presets).
As for this being under "techno", I don't think so. I mean, there was no actual drum beat to speak of, and there was no melody. But, as for you just starting out, it's not bad... Except for the use of Sytrus.
Anyway, I'll keep checking in to see how you improve!
Peace!
>TK<
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but not enough bass to make it great. If you could just crank the bass (obviously within reason) it would help it. If you could also lower some of those really high pitched synths, thatd be great... Plus, the long, dead ending is annoying. If you could work out a real ending thatd also be great.
But hey! Other than lack of bass and ending, not bad!
Peace!
>TK<
ps: the little choir effect was nice.
Author's Response:
you're right, more effort could be put into EQing, I'll do that right now although I do think the higher synths are fine ^_^ thanks for the suggestion. as for the ending, like I said I was stuck. But I had no idea there was that silence there, I thought I made it loop. should have reviewd the track before I posted it, eh?
Thanks for the good review!
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