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Awesome!

This is really cool. It's dirty and hits hard. I like it. :)

I wish my stuff sounded like this. Lol.

Good work man!
>TorkKey<

axeFX responds:

thanks

Well hello!

Finally you made something? proud of ya.

It's really good. Actually, in a way it's better than my stuff.

But if your not sure about genre, listen to some submissions by other people (usually the highest score in that genre will work)...

Good job and good luck!

>TK<

amathas responds:

Thanks for the review dude.

It's an improvement.

but not by much. Your going to have to get away from using Sytrus. I mean, it's not that it's bad, its actually good, but it's just been used and abused by EVERYONE!!!

In fact, if you want, I know where you can get some good free ones that you can mess around with (yes they have presets).

As for this being under "techno", I don't think so. I mean, there was no actual drum beat to speak of, and there was no melody. But, as for you just starting out, it's not bad... Except for the use of Sytrus.

Anyway, I'll keep checking in to see how you improve!

Peace!
>TK<

Good

but not enough bass to make it great. If you could just crank the bass (obviously within reason) it would help it. If you could also lower some of those really high pitched synths, thatd be great... Plus, the long, dead ending is annoying. If you could work out a real ending thatd also be great.

But hey! Other than lack of bass and ending, not bad!

Peace!
>TK<

ps: the little choir effect was nice.

S3C responds:

you're right, more effort could be put into EQing, I'll do that right now although I do think the higher synths are fine ^_^ thanks for the suggestion. as for the ending, like I said I was stuck. But I had no idea there was that silence there, I thought I made it loop. should have reviewd the track before I posted it, eh?

Thanks for the good review!

Very nice!

Personally, I think this would be great at the end of a sad movie, or after a war scene where they show the dead bodies laying on the ground. OR during the credits.

Anyway, great song! It really does make one think about the past and such.

Peace!
>TK<

takeflight responds:

Hmm, yes, it does have a finalizing quality to it... thanks for the review!

Not bad!

I just dont feel the bass in it though. If you could turn up the bass it'd be worthy of a 9/10 I think...

But as it is right now, 7/10 & 4/5

Peace!
>TK<

Teamd0m1nat3 responds:

thanks man, the bass is verrrry low. what are you listening to it on? i wrote it on really nice monitors i should have known it wouldn't carry through to anything else. anyways, it's an older song of mine i'd like to think my newer work is better. i'll have a brand new song up later this week you should check it out!

Well, credit for trying.

I noticed you have a problem with the bass drum being WAY overpowered in most of your songs. This is not good in any way shape or form, but with a little work I think it will turn out just fine. All you really need to do is turn the bass drum down a ton, and turn your melody up (dont over do either of those, both should be present).

Overall, I'm not going to lie, it's pretty bad. But, being as I'm not TOO good myself, I give you 4/10 and 2/5.

Peace!
>TK<

Not bad

But I liked the version that you had on your myspace a LOT more. But as I said, not bad.

The one true thing that killed it for me on this version, is the drums and the synth you changed at around 3 mins. That synth just sounds terrible and is kinda soft. As for the drums, its really just the snare, it just sounds out of place. As of how, I'm not really sure, but it just does not sound right.

But, it is not bad. It's nice to see you re-doing some of your own work.

Peace!
>TK<

Interesting.

I like what your doing here. It most definitely is unique.

One thing I'd recommend is more bass though. Then, it could be put in DnB.

But over all not bad, for a preview.

Check my newest song "Demon" and tell me what you think!
>TK<

Keep it up man!!!

This is music!

Your music is the best stuff I've found on NewGrounds. No joke. The vocals are amazing, the piano part is awesome, and the way it was put together is just unbelievable.

Oh yeah, I love the lyrics. Truly a masterpiece! Cant wait to hear more from you soon!

>TK<

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