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Not bad.

I liked it. It was just a little annoying after a while...

But it was unique and all so I'd say a 9/10

Peace
>TK<

Now I'm no rap or Hip-hop fan,

but this is good. Nice catchy music behind the vocals that are very nice.

The only thing I'd say is to work on an ending. It just didnt fit anything.

Otherwise, VERY nice! Keep up the awesome work!!!

>TK<

{5/5}

Ooooooo!

Wasn't bad. I love the beginning guitar part. But at 30 seconds, it seemed kind of lame (no offense). I will say though that the intro for everything at 9 or 10 seconds was good. Nice work

>TK<

EOVotes4Pedro responds:

thank you! this is a really late response, my bad...but the series is finished now
and i'm just doing "TSH" songs now. thanks again, though!

your friend,
-EOV4P

Well,

it is better than the original. But you do need to turn down the guitar a little bit more. Cause as frozensnakee said, it does sound more like metal than funk. The bassline is good though. (just use a more jazzy sounding bass, if you will)...

Getting better!
>TK<

Very nice!

I like the piano part in it. I like the little switch up at 1:20 ish. It's nice... (I write as I listen sorry.) But very good. I marked you down for poor choice in some of the synths. But the one at 2:51 ish was fantastic! So props for that.

Right on man! I should learn from what you do!
>TK<

I like it a lot!

9 because it's good. (not amazing though)

But it's a HELL of alot better than anything I can throw together. Good work man. It flows and I could listen to this for hours. Well, maybe 3 times through.

Good work
>TK<

ColbyArmstrong responds:

Thanks For The Review

It could be...

But I dont want to. Its not terrible the first time. But then it just gets annoying and I want to puke.

OH! I know what it is. THE GUITAR SYNTH you used. Its annoying and gives me a headache. Change that if you put this up ANY where else.

Peace
>TK<

ps: I like the bass part. It's not bad

EOVotes4Pedro responds:

thanks for the constructive critisism ;)

Not the best I've heard...

but a hell of a lot better than anything I can do. I like the fade in thing that happens at 00:07 but is should have gone into something heavier. But not bad! :)

It wasnt bad

But wasnt very good either. It was just a giant loop of the same bass part. Yeah every now and then something would change. But not enough.

But it wasnt terrible, hence the 7/10.

>TK<

You did it again!

You made an absolutely amazing song out of sounds. I congratulate you.

The score:
5 for it being electronic
2 for it not being rap
2 for it being good
last point lost for being Trance...jk. It's because it sounds TOO much like trance.

But like I said, this song is great and I hope to hear more from you... AND A CD!!!

Peace
>TK<

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